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Nice sonnet, Luis, "And yell with force now I am living life.' very nice line, shows emotion very well. What's wrong with ten syllables a line in forteen lines?

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William J Spirdione
William J Spirdione

Written by William J Spirdione

William J Spirdione is a poet who writes sonnets and more about nature and the humans within it.

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